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The black crow cries again.
CRAWWWW, CRAWWWW
It wakes me up to loneliness.
It reminds me that I am empty.
I have no one but myself and he.
CRAWWWW, CRAWWWW
The sky is gray, much like the color of my soul.
I feel a vast mixture of emotions as the crow stares at me.
Pain. Sadness. Grief. Depression. Remorse.
CRAWWWW, CRAWWWW
The crow is talking to me.
Telling me to go sit under a rose bush, so I do.
CRAWWWW, CRAWWWW
The crow is smarter than I thought.
The pain that I get from being prodded by the thorns of the bush help me to realize something.
Realize that I am high.
After two days and many tears, here it is: my first poem I wrote for all of you on DA. There will be more to come, but in the mean time, I hope you enjoy this poem as much as I do.
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metallicalover29 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
i love it and i like crows
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Bruce-Wayne-69 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Thank you. :) I also like crows, but they depress me a little.
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:iconmetallicalover29:
metallicalover29 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
welcome and it is true most of the time
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Kishex-Nevarx Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow. I'm not very good at commenting poems, but it's a poem I like :)
I like the picture too!
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Bruce-Wayne-69 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Any comment is a good one. :) So, yeah, double thanks... actually make that a triple thanks because of the favorite.
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Kishex-Nevarx Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem! :)
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